Eric’s writing – 2017 grade 3

1. Animals. Feb 2017

animals are different because some animals don t have the same things as the another animal. like the elephant is the largest animal there is. but the smallest animal is the mouse. the elephant is different then the mouse because they eat different kind of food. like a fox and the camel are different because they live somewhere else because the fox lives in the forest and the camel lives in the desert.

I think wing would like to fish cause when you get a fish you would want to do it a again I got mad my first time fishing because in the lake their were a lot of rock so when I threw my line in the water it would be stuck under a rock so I never got a fish in my life.

2. Amazing beaches.  March 2017

i don’t know what it says so i can’t tell you what i am thinking.  So you can tell me what it says or i well do nothing so you better tell me it now. Or you well know what well happen next.  i well give you 1 mint to think and when time is up you well feel pain and it my time to punch you and kick you and slap you so you better tell me know or i well keep on doing it in tell you tell me. and buy the time you want to say it you well be dead. so be before i do all of this i tell you r.i.p.  r.i.p. means rest in peas and it you.

3. Amazing beach . March 07, 2017

what makes a beach unique and amazing is that not a lot of people go to the beach so you don’t get annoyed by anyone ells. what makes a beach unique is that like all the beaches that I go to are cold but the warm water beach is unique because you wouldn’t be cold you would be warm. what makes a beach amazing is like the beach where people throw glass in to the water and after some moths or years the glass will look like gems and gold.

4. Eric wrote 1000 letters today. March 08, 2017. Tried so hard to make 1000 letters as below:

if i had to describe Carlos’s family i would describe it like this. At the beginning they were happy then getting a little sad then more sad then very sad. In the middle of the story they want outside and their neighbors too they met some where very snowy place and talked about Carlos’s first thanksgiving. At the end of the story they had the thanksgiving party and played board games and had fun. the last part is to tell you his feelings Carlos’s feelings are excited then happy then sad then more sad then a little pit more happy then happy then very happy then super happy. that was the story and described at the same time and told you his feelings. this is how i would describe Carlos’s thanksgiving so bye bye everyone are you going to say bye bye back to me please say bye bye to me i am listening come on if you are not going the say bye bye then i will wait here in tell you say bye bye you half to come on I’m waiting i am also listening i am saying all of this because i want to get end

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